avoiding overwriting while still building rich scenes
"One day I will find the right words, and they will be simple." -- Jack Kerouac
Have you ever noticed that you can stop doing too much only to think you’re doing too little, and that your brain is equally busy either way? “ . Beautiful. I lived the sensory details in this piece.
Thanks for reading, Kristen.
I wish you well with it, Jen. Returning to school can be such an exhausting time. I love that you're carving out time for your next novel. Keep going!
The students are amazing, but yeah ... whew! Thank you, Robin. :)
Fantastic questions. I will take this with me. Best wishes, well done.
I just use that sensory detail “the pain in his eyes” I am rethinking it👀
"One day I will find the right words, and they will be simple." -- Jack Kerouac
Have you ever noticed that you can stop doing too much only to think you’re doing too little, and that your brain is equally busy either way? “ . Beautiful. I lived the sensory details in this piece.
Thanks for reading, Kristen.
I wish you well with it, Jen. Returning to school can be such an exhausting time. I love that you're carving out time for your next novel. Keep going!
The students are amazing, but yeah ... whew! Thank you, Robin. :)
Fantastic questions. I will take this with me. Best wishes, well done.
I just use that sensory detail “the pain in his eyes” I am rethinking it👀